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    dots Submission Name: Aul-Mun-Ep-Pitradots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsAul-Mun-Ep-Pitradots
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    In Aztec stone
    The countless steps
    The mystic ley
    Of pyramids

    The tales of temples
    The Golden ships
    Just as the sun
    Nibiru rises

    To teleport the mountains peek
    It was as timeless is
    The divine mechanics of the stars
    When prophets declared the age of Iron
    The Great Forgetting
    Wonders where the people went
    Exodus, on our Golden ships

    What once was then and now is lost
    While Gaia slept in a tomb of stone
    But now the door is smashed, the seal is broke
    She walks again within the Earth

    And timeless is as timeless was
    We wept but did not look
    The mind of woe cannot equate in faith
    Nor rise beyond what it is taught

    But now the sun begins
    As the aeon sets
    Its lessons learned in mindlessness
    The Aztec stone
    The Mayan steps
    The promises made
    In the ley of pyramids

    The tales of temples
    Nibiru rises
    And like the sun
    We return
    On our Golden ships












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