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    dots Submission Name: Afraiddots
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    Author: UnderlinedInRed
    ASL Info:    18/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 196/262/123
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAfraiddots
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    I am afraid of what you値l say to me,
    Where we値l go,
    If you値l stay with me.
    I am afraid of how you will touch me
    Roughly, or softly,
    Or simply brush me.
    I am afraid you will remind me
    Of memories I don稚 like
    Of people not in my life.
    I am afraid you will tell me
    All the little things
    I should have never heard.
    I am afraid you will love me
    Unrestricted, fully opened,
    And I値l reject it.
    I am most afraid that I値l work so hard
    To let you in,
    And you値l walk away
    I値l never be okay.




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      Those are some of the most valid fears I've ever seen expressed... definitely valid and honest and what everyone I'm guessing (I know, it applies to me) feels when you start feeling that roller-coaster lift in the pit of your stomach over some cheesy smile... Hello, My Worst Nightmare, I see you're next heartache... shall we start this fiasco at your place, mine, or a rental???

    I liked this very much, IOW.
    | Posted on 2010-04-26 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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