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    dots Submission Name: Boreddots
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    Author: franki jorge
    ASL Info:    19/f/ca
    Elite Ratio:    0.82 - 5/12/54
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       written in jail 3/9/2010


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    dotsBoreddots
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    dammit i'm bored
    there's nothing to do
    just sit in this chair
    and wait for food

    its all too nasty
    i dont want to eat
    o0o0o today is corndog
    finally some real meat

    this book im reading
    is a little strange
    im on chater 7
    but its time to change

    i cant wait till 7
    time for wristband
    after i can sleep
    and dream of ocean sand

    22 more days
    i cant hold myself
    nothing to help pass time
    and reading doesnt help

    20 more minutes
    until we can chow
    cookie and meat
    its not long now

    theres school tonight
    its so much fun
    im studying alot of math
    the stars and the sun

    im gonna draw
    or find something to do
    i have so many poems
    i cant wait to share with you




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