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    dots Submission Name: YOUdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Between the infinitely large
    And the infinitely small
    At the exact mid point between the two
    The biological resolution
    Of creation
    Vibrates on the surface
    Of every living cell
    110000000000 hertz


    Are this Event Horizon
    The extension of creation
    Looking at itself

    Six feet of D.N.A
    Inside every cell of your body
    100 trillion cells on average
    Make up the total symbiosis
    Of cells


    600 trillion feet of D.N.A
    Would wrap around the Earth
    500 millions times

    Now proved to be
    Not a blue print, as everyone thought
    But an emotional conduit
    Which affects the construct

    This is not random
    But intense evidence
    Of a magnitude of organisation

    It is
    The poetry of creation


    You are the witness of the eternal
    The central fulcrum
    Of a fractal diversity
    Which originates
    And instigates
    In the presence and mind
    Of the Universe

    But inside all the clamour and static
    Which you and the world have created
    Forget this

    You forget
    That between the myriad motes and flecks
    Amidst the stars
    And the Galaxies
    Between the leaves and blades of grass
    You forget

    That YOU
    Are a miracle
    A sentient consciousness
    Which is aware of it all

    That YOU
    Have an identity
    An individuality
    A name
    A persona
    Through which
    Experience the creation
    Of the finite and the infinite

    This is not random
    But intense evidence
    Of a magnitude of organisation

    It is
    The poetry of creation




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      This has to be my favorite piece so far. It reminds me alot of quantam mechanics, are you familiar with any of that sutff? If you are, that explains alot of reasoning behind this poem. The power of creation is incredible and never ceases to be awe inspiring. The organisation behind it all, the networking and construct of a universe in which we are all connected and we all affect...ok I better stop I'm getting worked up lol I won't even go into entanglement hahaha good write :)
    | Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]

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