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    dots Submission Name: Be Mindfuldots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsBe Mindfuldots
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    Peripheral Vision senses the festive environment.
    Like brown sand collides with the ocean to form the perfect wave.
    As precious as diamonds formed through compression.

    Occasional visits to a card reader attempts to predict what we crave.
    No prediction is needed because we have already succeeded.
    Read the palm of my hand and see that I was destined to be with you.

    Pure as honey dripping from a comb, like dew from a leaf.
    Souls watching down as we live our lives.
    Wishing and praying for us to make the right decision.

    Tomorrow brings hope for some and pain for others.
    Be mindful and be aware, but continue to imagine and wonder.
    For thatís what makes the vacation worth the trip, life worth living.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like this. Wisdom comes in many forms but to remember to vacation along the journey was very nicely put. Seldom do I read incouraging poetry on this site. Thank you for the substance.
    | Posted on 2017-05-28 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]
      het this was really good
    the images you portray were very subtle but bright the part of the souls watching down at us i particularly like

    well done sandman
    | Posted on 2010-04-29 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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