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    dots Submission Name: The Prophets Mazedots
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    Author: col13x
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Prophets Mazedots
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    The prophets canít tell you the answer
    Of what you seek
    Is what you know

    They canít hand you
    A map to the maze
    They just tell you

    Its centre exists

    But they canít tell you which way to go

    The buried light
    That lay inside them
    They found by error and trial

    They sought the question
    To a familiar answer
    An explanation of themselves

    A journey of doubt
    Through paths of propaganda
    Untrodden jungles of the soul

    With only the shadow of ridicule to guide them
    They struggled still to find the centre
    No one told them which way to go

    Often in death their example
    The portal of the maze
    As far as they can lead you

    With only clues to entice
    They say ď please follow the trail of bread crumbs I left you Ē
    Each grain of truth in your own light

    And from the centre their words still whisper
    The voices of Dr. King and J.F.K
    They tell you that this maze has a centre

    But youíll have to find your own way

    Apparent truth is not the answer
    Collective agreement is not the truth
    Assassination, is the proof


    And if all you believe in, is the media
    If you think you are not fooled by the hoax
    And if you canít learn
    To see through these lies
    Then the airwaves, papers and celluloid
    Will tell you
    Which way to go

    The prophets canít tell you the answer
    Of what you seek
    To what you know

    They canít hand you
    A map to the maze
    They just tell you

    Its centre exists

    But they canít tell you which way to go











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