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    dots Submission Name: Uniquedots
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    Author: mistiekidd
    ASL Info:    31 like it f Al
    Elite Ratio:    4.49 - 37/48/65
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 460
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    Description:
       A poem I wrote at least two years ago, being bi-polar I go from extreme sadness to extreme bouts of hapiness. This is very true to life. I didn't have any hope that I would meet this person I talk about in the poem, one who gets me. Life suprized me and that person is sitting beside me. I'm a very lucky girl, especially considering that I'm so complicated! He is a dream come true. So this poem was questioning life and now it is unfolding as I speak.


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    I'm not sure if I should let go,
    or keep holding on.
    I feel so lost and all alone.
    Nothing goes right, something
    is always wrong.
    I laugh it off, and keep moving on.
    Anxiously awaiting the moment
    someone comes along and
    makes it all better.
    Living in disbelief.
    Thinking of what I should say in
    the very last letter.
    One minute I'm happy, the next
    deeply sad.
    For a little while I'm enjoying life.
    For a little while I regret it!!!
    Wondering why I get up, just to
    fall back down.
    Wondering why no one notices my
    smile is just a frown.
    My mistakes stay with me everyday.
    All of my friends just keep walking away.
    No one really listens!!!!
    I'm so deep, all I want is someone
    that gets my meaning.
    Will I ever find that someone, or
    will I just keep dreaming?
    Will I be brave enough to take the
    pain away?
    Will I be brave enough to face
    another day?
    What will I be if I ever grow up?
    Who will I please and who will
    I scare away?
    What will I miss if I just quit trying?
    I am so pleased with my petty things.
    I am so dissapointed with my
    petty ways.
    When will I do this, when will I
    do that?
    When will I escape lifes little traps?
    If I don't make it, who will I have
    touched?
    Who will miss me?
    Who will I crush?
    Who will move on and never
    say my name?
    Who will be the first to see I am
    not playing games?
    This is not for attention and no
    one is to blame.
    I can't stand stand all of the confusion.
    I'm so wrapped up in everyone's
    illusions!!!
    I try so hard to be what everyone
    thinks I should be.
    I just want to be what makes me happy!
    I'm afraid of who would be dissapointed,
    so I keep hiding to see what time brings.
    Waiting to surface and let someone in on
    my pain.
    What if they couldn't help?
    What if they didn't care?
    Has anyone ever had these thoughts I have?
    It's enough to drive one mad!!!!!




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