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GOLDEN WINGS?


Author: mistiekidd
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Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Durring a phase of melonchly, after three close friends commited suicide I wrote this directed to them. This poem is from when I was around eighteen and I never finished and my fiance finaly
helped me with the ending.


GOLDEN WINGS?


You think you will jump so you can fly.
You think you will jump so the pain will subside.
You think you will jump and move on to better things.
You think if you jump you will be handed a set of golden wings.
Your not sure whats right or wrong.
Your afraid that if jump you, you'll never see the light.
Your so confused and all alone.
Your not afraid to say goodbye,yet you carry on.
These are the lonely thoughts that trouble your mind.
Your afraid to move on and make a mistake.
Afraid of love, afraid your heart will break.
Your also afraid of the unknown,afraid you'll
mess it up if you quit or go on!!!!!!!

Mistie Kidd
Peace,Love and Craziness




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