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OUR LOVE


Author: mistiekidd
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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IN REALITY OUR LOVE IS SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL I COULD NOT HELP BUT WRITE
ABOUT IT!!!!!


OUR LOVE



A WONDERFUL SURPRISE,
A MOMENT IN TIME, THAT
WOULD CAUSE PATHS TO
CROSS AND TWO LIVES TO
CHANGE.

A BEAUTIFUL GIFT, THAT
TWO PEOPLE REALLY DESERVE.
LIVES ONCE FILLED BY SO
MUCH HAPPINESS AND PAIN,
ARE NOW FULL.

FULL OF TRUE LOVE,SOMETHING
BRAND NEW FOR THESE TWO.
SOMETHING THEY HAD NO HOPE
FOR NO LONGER SEARCHED FOR,
HAD FOUND THEM.

SO SWEET, NO ROMEO & JULIET
BUMPS IN THE ROAD, STRUGGLES,
OR REGRETS. BUT TRUE LOVE HAS
FORGIVENESS AND TOGETHER
THEY STAY STRONG.

TAKING EACH DAY ONE AT A TIME,
KNOWING IT'S A PAGE IN THEIR BOOK.

FACING ANY PROBLEMS AS THEY GO
ON AND TRYING TO WORK OUT THE REST.

WE SPEND EACH DAY TOGETHER AND
OURLOVE ONLY GETS STRONGER.
OF COURSE WE HAVE OUR PROBLEMS,
AND THE UP'S AND DOWN'S THAT
COME ALONG WITH ANY RELATIONSHIP.

THIS IS OUR LOVE, THE ONE THAT WE
ARE LIVING. THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST
POWERFUL FEELINGS IN TH WORLD.
DON'T LET ANYTHING STAND IN THE
WAY IF YOU FEEL LOVE THIS WAY!!!

OUR LOVE, OUR HOPE, OUR FAITH!!!!



MISTIE KIDD

PEACE,LOVE, & CRAZINESS




























Submitted on 2010-04-30 03:22:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  WE SPEND EACH DAY TOGETHER AND
OURLOVE ONLY GETS STRONGER.
OF COURSE WE HAVE OUR PROBLEMS,
AND THE UP'S AND DOWN'S THAT
COME ALONG WITH ANY RELATIONSHIP.

I THINK YOU ARE A PLAGIARIST, AS I FEEL QUITE CERTAIN I'VE READ THIS ON A GREETING CARD, AND WELL, YES, YOU'VE POSTED ANOTHER 5 OR 6 TO GO ALONG WITH IT. EXCELLENT!

HONESTLY, WRITING IS NOT YOUR DEAL, IT MAY NOT EVEN BE MY DEAL, BUT IT MOST DEFINTELY IS NOT YOURS. BUY A JOURNAL AND WRITE IN THAT. AND I'M SORRY THAT THIS WILL APPEAR RUDE AGAIN, BUT IT'S NOT GOODSTUFF AND YOU DON'T SEEM TO KNOW THAT.


| Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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