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Author: isis_lenore
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Like a person who finger pecks to type
The words are slow coming, and mistakes
Are more than just a little time consuming.

Louder than a post-it note in canary yellow
Uniform print, precisely defined; a notice
In permanent midnight curves and columns.

Crumpled and on the floor, it doesn’t matter
It’s a thought, a decision, a plan of action
Right or wrong- it's mine, it's mine, it's mine.

Submitted on 2010-04-30 05:32:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this, it reminds me of all those hour I try to come up with some great piece of work but just end of filling up my recycle bin with my failed experiments, it's very frustrating.
keep writing
| Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]
  Sounds like a notice to Like your different descriptions.
| Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by Cayman | [ Reply to This ]

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