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    dots Submission Name: Noticedots
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    Author: isis_lenore
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 459/207/102
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsNoticedots
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    Like a person who finger pecks to type
    The words are slow coming, and mistakes
    Are more than just a little time consuming.



    Louder than a post-it note in canary yellow
    Uniform print, precisely defined; a notice
    In permanent midnight curves and columns.



    Crumpled and on the floor, it doesnít matter
    Itís a thought, a decision, a plan of action
    Right or wrong- it's mine, it's mine, it's mine.




    Submitted on 2010-04-30 05:32:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this, it reminds me of all those hour I try to come up with some great piece of work but just end of filling up my recycle bin with my failed experiments, it's very frustrating.
    keep writing
    istalkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like a notice to me..lol. Like your different descriptions.
    | Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by Cayman | [ Reply to This ]


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