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    dots Submission Name: Drill Baby Drilldots

    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDrill Baby Drilldots

    Coasts oily as a teenager's face in puberty.
    Attempts fail to gain independence and liberty.
    Water set ablaze while dinosaur juice seeps from the gound.
    Plug in your car instead of filling at the pump.
    Offshore drilling to make more schillings.
    Valdez wasn't enough to stop wildlife's killing.

    Submitted on 2010-04-30 08:47:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the first line :P
    | Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]

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