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    dots Submission Name: Keep Ondots

    Author: KimmyBoo
    ASL Info:    1990/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 14/10/9
    Words: 267
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 415
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1768

       Wrote this when I was 15, in 2005. I added some stuff to it. And took out a few lines. I might take out more, but for now I'll leave it.

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    dotsKeep Ondots

    If nobody gives anything about you,
    You gotta deside to care about yourself,
    You cant let anybody hold you down,
    You gotta stand up and let yourself be known.

    You can make it,
    Dont let them tell you, you cant,
    Cause you can.

    You can do it,
    You can be it,
    You can live it,
    And when they tell you you cant,
    Tell them, "I can."

    Dont listen,
    Believe, Believe, In yourself,
    Dont let anybody pull you down,
    Let all their critism be your strength.

    If they aren't going to help you,
    Smile, wave goodbye, and
    Keep on walkin'.

    Dont let them be the reason,
    You didnt make it.
    Don't give them that satisfaction.

    God has created all of us, to make it,
    We just need to take his word for it,
    And move with it.

    Dont let their remarks tear at you,
    Dont let the looks behind their eyes,
    Be the judge of you.

    Look away,
    And focus on the goal.

    Just because nobody seems to care,
    Doesnt mean you need to stop trying,

    Keep on going,
    As they cast the stones,
    Believe, believe.
    And when you've made it,
    You'll beable to see,
    This total amazement of disbelief.

    They'll rub their eyes,
    And starch their heads,
    And all those times-
    they tryed to pull you down,
    will pull them down.

    Believe, Believe, Dont let go,
    Not yet, Keep on going,
    You'll be able someday to look back at them,
    And say...."I made it"

    Submitted on 2010-04-30 13:32:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it :) I don't find alot of positive pieces on this site so it's refreshing to read this. I really believe in what you're writing here and I can totally relate. My favorite part would have to be "God has created all of us, to make it,
    We just need to take his word for it,
    And move with it." I was always taught that the purpose of our dreams was for them to be fulfilled, that God doesn't give them to us without the promise of them coming to pass. Thanks for sharing this :)
    | Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]

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