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    dots Submission Name: What We Can't Have.. Part Onedots

    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    27 Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 261/310/148
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWhat We Can't Have.. Part Onedots

    Dancing in the middle of your moonlit street
    This April morning never tasted half as sweet
    and I feel this rhythm, I sway so free
    just like the world has only you and me

    One smile lights my soul like the midday sun
    so quietly now, so steadily begun
    We dance in the middle of your moonlit street
    fools for the freedom, making memories bittersweet

    You hands leave sparks trailing behind them
    in a baritone melody of heaven's hymn
    The longest goodbye of my life takes place here
    in the shortest moment I have ever lived.

    Submitted on 2010-04-30 18:31:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this.
    Great job at keeping a rythm. :]
    | Posted on 2010-05-01 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]

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