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    dots Submission Name: i hate them alldots
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    Author: saya225
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    dotsi hate them alldots
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    They are the most
    irratating .

    Bugging people...

    Hurting them

    mentaly and physically...

    i hate them all........



    Why do they do

    what they do.

    Do they enjoy hurting people?

    Do they enjoy being hated?

    I hate them all....



    They should all..

    go off somewhere and die...

    They don't deserve

    mercy.

    I hate them all....



    They do it to irratate us...

    they make fun of us.

    they don't care who their hurting.

    i hate them all.



    They do it for attention.

    they think.. their so cool.

    when they torment others.

    i hate them all.



    Then one of them

    snap...

    now one of us...

    is dead....

    they burned...her.

    I hate them.



    They don't deserve to live....

    and yet they do...

    what they have done deserves punisment..

    I hate them all.



    Then i'm next.

    they hit me..

    I fall..

    they kick me..

    i spew blood...

    i find a stick and i stab..and stab..and stab.

    i hate them all.



    the cops are coming.

    I drop the stick.

    I watch the lifless bodies not knowing if they might get up and try to hurt me.......

    I hate them all...



    Now most of them are dead..

    But not all...

    i still hate them....



    They've come back..

    And i am the one stabbed..

    She is with me and she is next...

    I pull the knife out of me and i go after them..

    she is now fine but..

    i'm....

    i lay i the ground..

    cold and bleeding out...



    i hate them

    i hate them all....




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      i think it nioce but it still i little mean but i like it sooooooooooooooooo kkeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppppppp uuuuuuuuuuup ttttttttthhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeee good work
    | Posted on 2010-04-30 00:00:00 | by angelagresham19 | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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