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    Author: saya225
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    Words: 197
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    dotswinddots
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    I'm all alone,
    I have been left
    in this big city.
    With the buildings that
    touch the sky.
    And where the sun meets the moon
    on the sunset.

    In the twilight
    the trees
    glow...under
    the moons gaze.....
    And the wolves,howl.
    "there coming" i
    whisper, silently.

    My hair flows in the wind.
    and you approach.



    i back up slowly

    you sill come

    we both not saying a word.



    Not reconicing who you were,

    i try to run.

    You grab my arm"don't go"you say.

    I let you pull me to your chest.



    I know this...this feeling.

    You are the one i love so dearly.

    i let you embrace me,

    as i do the same.



    As if this could ever end

    we hold eachother.



    We were left in this big city where the

    sun meets the moon on the sunset,

    and where the buildings touch the sky.



    The trees glow under the,

    moons gaze.

    Just as we stand in the wind...




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