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Lazy Poets

Author: istalkmurdoch
Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129 /48 /25
Words: 160
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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just read, and it explains itself....

Lazy Poets

you call yourself a poet
then sign up for a site
but then you never submit or comment
now, somethings just not right

I admit sometimes we can get lazy
but what a pitiful excuse
when you don't want to read a poem
you are not of use

this site was made for posting
then getting some feedback
but I can tell you something right now
that is something that we lack

do not be a lazy poet
you killing the others
and don't even know it

they feel rejected and alone
100 views and zero critques!
what is wrong with us
we're all pathetique!

I don't care if it's hard
just do it now
then you can go vomit in the sink!

do it for all of the other lazy poets
inspire them now
dare to be different
I know you know how

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| Posted on 2010-05-08 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
  The truth is we all see life and opportunity from diverse perspectives- take me for example. Am here cos i wanna be an online writer and earn from it. So obviously I am still in the training stage. With the alias one can write a bad piece get it bashed up. Yet not be feeling like a loser thanks to its anonymous. And when your good enough local mag,journals might take a columnist with your set of talent. This is just your training ground- learn with less shame to be someday head of your game. Other users relate to this site like a facebook type see others' activity only! Never aiding to building,but aid to destroy dreams by withholding an analysis that builds both the giver and receiver intellectualy with increase activity. Lastly for upcoming poets rhyming holds their interest, as they mature abstract deep content gets better-my opinion. Writer istalkmurdock is good u did this even in this format. thanks for your comment but did you read other stuff they aint plenty. But you might see something worth bashing or otherwise? Thanks
| Posted on 2010-05-08 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
  This poem is absolutely true! There are some folks who rather die than leave a comment!! I hope your fine poem gets someone to commment!!! great write!!
| Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  this is kind of funny and alot of unnessary ryhming i really dont like reading stuf that people try to rhyme everything usually i dont even finish reading it
it reminds of what my kids were writing in grade 2
| Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  Haha, well I comment on poems... but I know how it feels to not be critiqued it adds a feeling that your not good enough and makes you not want to write anymore.
| Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]
  Yeah, I try to comment a lot; but that uses up my limited online time, then I don't post enough. Dangit, this website is so much like life that I am almost considering getting a life but maybe I am too lazy?

You should have put in a bit about courage, because you are so brave rhyming "poet" with "know it"!
| Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
  haha guilty as charged! I can sit here for hours and not write a single comment. I'm trying to change that so it's funny I ran across this poem. Thanks for the push :)
| Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]

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