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    dots Submission Name: Lazy Poetsdots
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    Author: istalkmurdoch
    Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129/48/25
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 808
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1011



    Description:
       just read, and it explains itself....



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    dotsLazy Poetsdots
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    you call yourself a poet
    then sign up for a site
    but then you never submit or comment
    now, somethings just not right

    I admit sometimes we can get lazy
    but what a pitiful excuse
    when you don't want to read a poem
    you are not of use

    this site was made for posting
    then getting some feedback
    but I can tell you something right now
    that is something that we lack

    beware!
    do not be a lazy poet
    you killing the others
    and don't even know it

    they feel rejected and alone
    100 views and zero critques!
    what is wrong with us
    we're all pathetique!

    I don't care if it's hard
    and you ACTUALLY HAVE TO THINK
    just do it now
    then you can go vomit in the sink!

    do it for all of the other lazy poets
    inspire them now
    dare to be different
    I know you know how




    Submitted on 2010-05-01 10:30:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2010-05-08 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      The truth is we all see life and opportunity from diverse perspectives- take me for example. Am here cos i wanna be an online writer and earn from it. So obviously I am still in the training stage. With the alias one can write a bad piece get it bashed up. Yet not be feeling like a loser thanks to its anonymous. And when your good enough local mag,journals might take a columnist with your set of talent. This is just your training ground- learn with less shame to be someday head of your game. Other users relate to this site like a facebook type see others' activity only! Never aiding to building,but aid to destroy dreams by withholding an analysis that builds both the giver and receiver intellectualy with increase activity. Lastly for upcoming poets rhyming holds their interest, as they mature abstract deep content gets better-my opinion. Writer istalkmurdock is good u did this even in this format. thanks for your comment but did you read other stuff they aint plenty. But you might see something worth bashing or otherwise? Thanks
    | Posted on 2010-05-08 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is absolutely true! There are some folks who rather die than leave a comment!! I hope your fine poem gets someone to commment!!! great write!!
    | Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is kind of funny and alot of unnessary ryhming i really dont like reading stuf that people try to rhyme everything usually i dont even finish reading it
    it reminds of what my kids were writing in grade 2
    sandman
    | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha, well I comment on poems... but I know how it feels to not be critiqued it adds a feeling that your not good enough and makes you not want to write anymore.
    | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I try to comment a lot; but that uses up my limited online time, then I don't post enough. Dangit, this website is so much like life that I am almost considering getting a life but maybe I am too lazy?

    You should have put in a bit about courage, because you are so brave rhyming "poet" with "know it"!
    | Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      haha guilty as charged! I can sit here for hours and not write a single comment. I'm trying to change that so it's funny I ran across this poem. Thanks for the push :)
    | Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by all2rest | [ Reply to This ]


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