The truth is we all see life and opportunity from diverse perspectives- take me for example. Am here cos i wanna be an online writer and earn from it. So obviously I am still in the training stage. With the alias one can write a bad piece get it bashed up. Yet not be feeling like a loser thanks to its anonymous. And when your good enough local mag,journals might take a columnist with your set of talent. This is just your training ground- learn with less shame to be someday head of your game. Other users relate to this site like a facebook type see others' activity only! Never aiding to building,but aid to destroy dreams by withholding an analysis that builds both the giver and receiver intellectualy with increase activity. Lastly for upcoming poets rhyming holds their interest, as they mature abstract deep content gets better-my opinion. Writer istalkmurdock is good u did this even in this format. thanks for your comment but did you read other stuff they aint plenty. But you might see something worth bashing or otherwise? Thanks
This poem is absolutely true! There are some folks who rather die than leave a comment!! I hope your fine poem gets someone to commment!!! great write!!
this is kind of funny and alot of unnessary ryhming i really dont like reading stuf that people try to rhyme everything usually i dont even finish reading it
it reminds of what my kids were writing in grade 2
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Haha, well I comment on poems... but I know how it feels to not be critiqued it adds a feeling that your not good enough and makes you not want to write anymore.
Yeah, I try to comment a lot; but that uses up my limited online time, then I don't post enough. Dangit, this website is so much like life that I am almost considering getting a life but maybe I am too lazy?
You should have put in a bit about courage, because you are so brave rhyming "poet" with "know it"!
haha guilty as charged! I can sit here for hours and not write a single comment. I'm trying to change that so it's funny I ran across this poem. Thanks for the push :)