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    dots Submission Name: Home lifedots
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    Author: isis_lenore
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 459/207/102
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 497
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 514



    Description:
       It's a rewrite of silence.


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    dotsHome lifedots
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    Trapped in the sacred institution called home,

    Televised as being the place you want to be-

    But what if its not all that its cracked up to be?



    Trapped by that sacred feeling named love,

    Love, love, love

    If this is love, Id hate to be the one you hate-



    Discolored and humiliated as it is,

    I think, Id rather be labeled insane.





    Submitted on 2010-05-02 07:18:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      love, love will tear us apart. again.
    | Posted on 2010-05-03 00:00:00 | by cedrickdada | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm well I thought that it was interesting.... and I get where your coming from... keep writing

    istalkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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