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Lil Girl & Her Ghost

Author: mistiekidd
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Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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During a depressed phase this is just something I thought of and jotted down, I do that to get it out of my system!

Lil Girl & Her Ghost

Once upon a time,
a girl was born.
As she grew she
noticed she had this
It followed her always,
she was never the same.
People got close, maybe
one more than the most.
She was volume.
Not her fault.
No mute no off.
She walked alone.
She never cried.
She prayed real hard,
yet never died.
Why, why her, why this thing?
This is suppose to be life,
not some stupid game.
She can't control it, as a matter
of fact it controls her.
She can't help it,
she is not to blame.
It's this ghost, bi-polar is it's name.

Submitted on 2010-05-02 15:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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