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    dots Submission Name: Withindots
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    Author: Quin
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 39/39/21
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       Beware your shadows.


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    dotsWithindots
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    Amongst the darkness, bold and green,
    there lurk things which cannot be seen;
    with golden eye, and cloven hoof,
    or maybe wings and fanged tooth.
    And in this darkness, deep and dim,
    these creatures seek, with heart, amid
    the shining comfort of the day,
    our own bright sorrows - held at bay.

    To things that which in darkness dwell,
    our hate, our pain, our sadness fell,
    are delicious, tasty sweet,
    and make their hollow souls complete.
    And we who bask in light and sound
    should well remember what is found
    when one falls too far, too deep -
    into loathing sorrow, steep:

    For if you spend your time with hate,
    you will begin to contemplate;
    to taste despair from foreign lips,
    the taste of tears and sunken ships.
    Be cautious when you deal with pain!
    In case, in dealing, you became
    a thing like those who live within
    the heartless darkness, cold and grim.




    Submitted on 2010-05-02 16:01:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really liked the second stanza, it was very well written, and your use of certain words is fantastic.

    please keep writing

    istalkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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