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    dots Submission Name: from someones dA i needed a laughdots
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    Author: ellesmera
    ASL Info:    18. Female. England
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 43/263/115
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 627
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1293



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    dotsfrom someones dA i needed a laughdots
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    Character's Name: Kei
    Race: human
    Gender:male
    Seme/Smuke/Uke: smuke

    Age: 18

    Hair Color: dark green curls
    Eye Color: brown
    Physical Description/Pic: hes 5'1 skinny with green curly hair and glasses
    Personality: he's very sweet loves his dog a teacup poodle named snowball

    Background/History:he's from a miltary family where his dad transphered to difrent countries ever 2 years witch is why he can speak so many languages he was taught that he had to do more than his best and that a man is a tought guy never shead a tear or be gay when his dad found out he was gay he was kicked out so he survies in a meadium sized appenret taking collage classes to become a doctor
    Likes: cooking cleaning and being cuddled
    Turn Ons: cuddling nibbling his ear and when someone cooks for him
    Turn Offs: messiness and roughness

    Quirks:
    is a over achiever so hes often running around doing extra assignments translating for someone since he can speak English Spanish Japaneses french Hindi Italian and Chinese cooking something for a online business he runs with a friend prating on his violin or rarely sleeping




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      uhh.... this has bad grammar and spelling, and there is no point to it, it sounds like one of those like anime profile/background things for the manga characters....
    | Posted on 2010-05-02 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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