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Marie slipped outside and made for the shoal, she held in her hand a golden pistole, it was all nearly silent and the moon sang a song of the mourning of night and the coming of dawn Though her path was dark her feet turned no stone, for she'd learned the way when she was alone, it was all nearly silent and she hastened her step for the morning would bring what the night had long kept A bend and she came to the mound in the spring, she lifted her head to quietly sing, it was all nearly silent her voice ever low seranading the night for the life of her beau Her face flushed with red, her hair in her teeth, she waited for him alone by the reeds, it was all nearly silent when the sun first did rise and her mourning lament brought the cruelest surprise He came with the shadows, his heart in his hands, he slid with the breeze and the slope of the land, it was all nearly silent the blood dripping slow from the hole in his chest to the dirt down below But she saw not a move, and heard not a sound, her eyes never saw the hole in the mound, it was all nearly silent when he reached for her dress and her hands --- they fell like a stone from her chest She spun on her toes and made as to scream, but he'd already grabbed her dress at the seams, it was all nearly silent as he took her down and forever they lay in his home underground And obscured in the mist a man patiently stood, his hands at his side, his face cloaked by hood, it was all nearly silent when he snatched the pistole and into the mist, he took Marie's soul |
That was one of the best things I've ever read on this site. It flowed perfect and did a grand job of telling a haunting story! A lot of stuff I read on this site is either wierd or not very original, your piece was perfect. Four stars!!!!! Mistiekidd | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by mistiekidd | [ Reply to This ] | This is an absolutely beautiful piece.. The rhyme and flow of it is perfectly timed and my heard beat out a rhythm as I read it.. Masterfully done! | | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by Maskannai | [ Reply to This ] | James, you're one of my favorite writers on this site. | Despite my bashing(s) of the majority of your work in the past. | Posted on 2010-05-03 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ] | |