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Author: mistiekidd
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Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Just something I wrote in the midst of being angry.


Like a river that runs through
changing my state of mind.
Surfacing in an explosion of
I'll soon regret.
Making me pretend to hate.
Shouting emotions that never
cause anyone to celebrate.
It's an overwhelming feeling,
that I can take no longer
It reaches it's peak,
while my innsides break.
My pride sinks as the feelings fade,
sorry is all I can say. Sorry.


Submitted on 2010-05-03 16:05:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can see how allowing your rage to become misdirected can cause feelings of guilt , but try not to lose sight of it's possible inspirations . There is a real place for outrageous indignation , even for vindictiveness vendetta vehemence . Before you cry foul let me put a little retrospectively retroactive on all those dead bodies on the floor for you . Murder , rape , pedophilia , there are reasons for rage . You shouldn't give yours up so easily . Try to get to know it . Perhaps then you'll be better able to control it .

A kindred sprit .
| Posted on 2010-05-11 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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