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Dear Daddy

Author: mistiekidd
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Longing
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Dear Daddy

Dear Daddy,
Hi, it's your little girl. I'm all grown up now,
Daddy, why did you hate me so? What did your
little girl do other than love you?
How could you look at me with so much disgust?
Daddy, I wanted you to hold my hand,tuck me in, read to me, & teach me all that you knew.
Instead you hurt your little girl, not just then but
now too. Daddy shame on you! You never looked at me and said I'm so proud, you are so beautiful.
You yelled and hurled things. You made me afraid, a coward, weak! You were not there
when I needed you most, to defend me against the hands of nasty men. Or from my own hands that held razors, and knives trying to absolve me from my sin.
You were not there to see your own blood, your two grandbabies a boy and then a girl. You were a drunk, a pathetic site. I couldn't be mad at you because I felt sorrow.
How could that be after all that you have done to me, I'm the one who is sorry?
You've done it again causing pain and shame.
I wish I could know you, your not a monster.
I know something you don't want me to know,
you were hurt the very same way.
So you showed me life the only way you knew
I'm sorry daddy, and I still love you!!!

Your daughter

Submitted on 2010-05-04 08:36:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This piece is very selfless, and understanding. I would imagine it took quite a bit of time to see things this way for you this sympathetic and loving. Overall, I liked it, the feeling was very relatable for me.

Absolve, I havn't seen that one used in a while, nice wording. Anyhow, keep up the great work, people are reading! Have a great day, or night should I say!!

| Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by sensetofeel | [ Reply to This ]

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