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    dots Submission Name: Collapsing New Foundationdots
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    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 41/129/120
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Satire
    Total Views: 599
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1275



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    dotsCollapsing New Foundationdots
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    apostrophe, misanthrope, dealing some kind of new hope
    six sinking trees and rows of collapsing buildings, saved
    slow,flow, easy to owe, bears strange translations to found
    we put ourselves at home waiting for help to come
    leaving ourselves to win or to wound

    we live our life in normal
    trying so hard to walk steady
    We live through life in formal
    trying so hard to think easy

    telescope, heart on dope, accelerating our frontal lobe
    six smiling men and list of suspicious people, saved
    deniable, careful of handle,bears new valediction to found
    we put ourselves home with hearts on fire
    leaving our friends to win or to wound

    we send our life in normal
    trying so hard to walk steady
    we live our life in denial
    trying so hard to look happy

    we live our life through wasteful youth
    we life ourselves through undereducated childhood
    Now we stand on a fragile ground
    leaving ourselves to win or to wound

    we live our life under shaky buildings
    we life ourselves through misguided teaching
    now we stand on a collapsing foundation
    leaving ourselves to win or to wound




    Submitted on 2010-05-04 09:49:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really really like this.
    I don't even know what to commetn about besides I like this.
    Very intersting.
    | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by xxiknownowxx | [ Reply to This ]
      this kind of struck me as a song lol
    I didn't really get it, but sometimes you can get away with that when it comes to poetry,
    keep writing
    istalkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-05-04 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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