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    dots Submission Name: Taste of Defeatdots
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    Author: Linz
    ASL Info:    24/f/Ne
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 86/118/44
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       Like most of my poems it was written about an ex over last summer.


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    dotsTaste of Defeatdots
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    "If we're together?
    There is no if
    We will be together!"
    Forever was our if

    You said no if in forever
    But your the one who ended it
    No matter waht I do, wherever
    Theres memories of us, just a bit

    "I'm doin it just to be nice
    I promise I won't sleep with her
    When we get back together it'll be so nice"
    We fell apart due to her.

    So many promises made to me
    Now he dosen't care they are all broken
    It hurts to know they will never be
    Maybe that was just his token

    "Will you marry me?
    And I don't want a maybe
    Come on you belong with me."
    Then I changed my maybe

    Yes, we were to be together
    Just us, then later a little one
    I take the dream with me wherever
    I go. Oh by the way they won!

    "They didn't win
    Its no over yet
    So far I own the win"
    You havn't prooved jack yet!

    I'm sorry but they won
    You were the one who failed
    What did you say would be done?
    So how many times have you failed?

    " I can't seem to date andyone else
    Maybe cuase I'm committed to you
    but good for you, you got someone else
    Keep this in mind: I love you!"




    Submitted on 2004-07-24 23:51:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      for a moment there, i was confused, but it's easy to see as you read on that there's a struggle of confusion. the disillusionment is evident. also, the sad but, true sting of betrayal. the pain of broken dreams that don't seem to stop mocking/dancing in your head. believe me, this happened to me once before. i drove myself insane for a few years after. finally, i did a most painful of all thing; i let go. it was like a security blanket that was knatty and filthy; useless. i do have to say that this write impressed me with it's sincerity; vulnerability. another thing, the tables are turned; i found marco in georgia, he makes my ex firehorsie look like a candidate for elmer's glue.
    | Posted on 2004-07-25 00:00:00 | by pioneerheart | [ Reply to This ]


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