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    dots Submission Name: The Perpetual Psalmdots

    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
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    dotsThe Perpetual Psalmdots

    Rivers to emotions run deep, spiritual kinship we must keep
    Lenten celebrations prepare us for divine interventions

    In God we trust, while the sword we must thrust
    Fight fire with fire until the evilness tire

    Babylon will topple and the righteous will always prevail
    Scream at the top of your lungs and feel the blood of justice!

    Then let serenity consume you once the sun appears
    Cheers to the vigilant, resiliency is a must

    Itís in God we must trust because God is the ultimate judge
    Believe in yourself and believe in him for our actions will be assessed

    What matters now are the reactions to the action
    Be concrete and never retreat, because once itís overÖthen itís over

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      Great Wisdom. I do believe Lenten session is a very powerful time to be close to God. It's a time for testing
    and readiness.

    Love of Christ,
    | Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked the line "Be concrete and never retreat", it inspires me to want to do better, and I really like this poem, people are writing a lot of these lately, there must be a good bug going around in the air, I appreciate your good poem today.

    please keep writing.
    | Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]

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