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    dots Submission Name: Behind These Barsdots
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    Author: Aangskate
    ASL Info:    18/male
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 133/117/44
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 635
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 642



    Description:
       A fleeting victory-!


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    dotsBehind These Barsdots
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    Pleas disgust me.
    I show a grace,
    For this in return.

    I am tired and worn out.
    I am young and alive.
    I will not be chained.

    This attitude,
    Changes your appearance-
    What I see is a pouting child.

    I can blame myself,
    I can whisper an apology.
    I smile still.

    The changes are not all bad,
    You are less of a rock,
    Too little of a wall.

    I have been closed against you.
    I can see you,
    I will not look at you.

    You hate that.
    I love it.
    The keys are mine.




    Submitted on 2010-05-05 10:11:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is similar style to your other poem, it shows a lot of power.

    | Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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