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    dots Submission Name: the stomaches terrible butterflysdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsthe stomaches terrible butterflysdots
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    for some reason
    stillness is a given.
    as much as blood
    is the reason for living,
    so too does quietude
    unravel from us in whispers.

    barefooted, light steppings
    create hushed crushings
    amongst the grass..
    like the heart has a way
    of stuttering as it descends
    through the stomachs
    terrible butterflys.

    silence is ruined in this place;
    the dryness of a summers field,
    the crisp forest floor
    mocking its opposite sky
    with the low crys of a falling leaf.
    in a way,
    we're all ready to burn
    just start it all over;

    memories gone,
    traumas missing,
    static air inhaled into the lungs
    of an infant child beginning.
    it all reminds me
    of a poem
    that i forgot to write forever..




    Submitted on 2010-05-05 11:53:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Has a possesive feel to it. Sends the mind wandering across vistas of the writer's imagery. But typo error- field,stomach's . But Good all the same.
    | Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how you got the title from the actual poem
    | Posted on 2010-05-05 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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