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Talking to Myself By: InYuco Katan Numbness takes over. Autopilot sets in. No captin at the wheel. Nothing but just wind. Not a bird in the sky Not a sound in the air Emptiness all around Nothing but thoughts to compair Screaming until my voice is gone but no one is around to hear me Locked in this dungon for all time All alone I'm trapted with misorry I cannot escape No matter how hard i try I pull at the walls just to hear him mock me He says I am worthless as my knees begin to quiver He says I am weak as my arms give out He keeps nailing in the stakes As I start to break I drop down to my knees bow my head in defeat He laughs in my face He pulls out a sword He says I won As he runs it through my heart I sit there and laugh at him A smerk on my face He asks what is going on as he withdraws the sword I explain to him my heart is gone Shattered a long time ago And nothing left in its place Now its time you go He said one day you will get it back then I will strike again I smerked and said Never not again. |
lol typo...haha yeah...my bad...should use ms word not notepad.| Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by InYuco Katan | [ Reply to This ] | in the fourth stanza, on the last line, was the word supposed to be "misery" ? misorry is not a word... | other wise I though it was very good, I could see myself in the tiny room... keep writing istalkmurdoch | Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ] | |