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    dots Submission Name: What?dots
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    Author: MyX
    ASL Info:    27/m/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 932/973/107
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Spoof/Death
    Total Views: 829
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 354



    Description:
       Real (adj). Being or occurring in fact or actuality; having verified existence; not illusory

    Wager (v) stake on the outcome of an issue.


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    dotsWhat?dots
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    Question the truth,
    the answer is wagered.
    The answer you question
    is for damn sure the truth.
    that is answered and wagered
    and in truth the question.
    Which wagers and questions
    are answers to truth?
    Your question for damn sure
    is answered.

    The truth has been wagered.




    Submitted on 2010-05-07 10:26:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It seems to me that your saying we should attempt to be existentially metaphysical with death in hopes of getting closer to our intrinsic affinity with infiniteness . If this is so I'm sure I must manifest destiny agree . The truth has been wagered .
    | Posted on 2010-05-08 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      well after recovering from my motionsickness [i swear this piece made me feel like i was riding the teacups at some lil sideshow thing] i would like to suggest that i have feared this outcome for quite a while...

    aparently even truth is relative these days and it doesnt really count for as much or hold as much weight as i would have hoped...
    if you can wager the truth i guess you can wager anything... right?
    | Posted on 2010-05-07 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm not sure what I kind of feed back that your asking for? "Counseling"?

    it's all somewhat unclear.....

    reading this made me feel like I'm just running around and around in circles.....

    haha
    istalkmurdoch
    | Posted on 2010-05-07 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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