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    dots Submission Name: nice guys finish lastdots

    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    26/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.27 - 63/298/259
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 713
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsnice guys finish lastdots

    i was stupid,i was blind
    i wish i could just rewind
    forget those words you said
    im just not good enough for you
    now i know we are through
    you walked away without a word
    you wouldnt even try
    you didnt even say goodbye
    it was over so fast
    cause nice guys finish last

    Submitted on 2010-05-08 01:53:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aw well not always hon. Don't feel bad. Girls are hard creatures to understand, and it had nothing to do with the fact that you are nice. Now you just need to find a nice girl to compliment you. Anyone that just comes as fast as they go was never worth you time in the first place. Just remember that despite what other people think or do, it doesn't matter on your part. You just worry about yourself and keep being productive, that's really just the best for now.

    I hope that I helped a little X_X if you ever need an encourager look me up

    Keep Writing!

    | Posted on 2010-06-04 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]

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