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    dots Submission Name: Foot Paindots
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    Author: istalkmurdoch
    Elite Ratio:    7.06 - 129/48/25
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFoot Paindots
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    "you dented my can!"
    cries my father
    "what about my foot??"
    he doesn't even bother






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