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    dots Submission Name: Power Worddots
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    Author: RequiemOfDreams
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97/140/38
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1362
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    Description:
       Please try and find what I am trying to say in this passage. It is a couple of things that you might have noticed in society and personal relationships.


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    The power of one word
    Could make or break the world
    The power of one phrase
    Could make or break- man or lady
    The strength in one's intention
    Could save or destroy mankind

    Power word, the word of forgiveness
    Power word, the word of love
    Power word, the word of hatred
    Power word, the word of trust
    Find the meaning we must
    If we're to live through forever
    Understand, or immortality never

    Speach the word of love
    Spray the word of hope
    But what are words without speach?
    Meet the connection, speach is for humans
    Understand the feeling, speach is for humans
    Know not how to say- but how to feel and connect
    Never let the power word, beat the power feeling




    Submitted on 2004-07-25 04:46:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is spiritual. I think you have so few comments, because people don't want to read into wrong, and look stupid. But I'll say what I have to say. It seems like you're writing about how words should never undermine feeling, because even though we might not always be able to talk, we will still feel. The part where it goes "The strength in one's intention," stuck out to me, because I've always thought that if you want something for a good enough reason, you're going to try really hard to get it, and if you try hard enough, and have a good enough intention, you'll get it... not always the case... but close enough, right? Heh, sorry if I've just made a bunch of misinturpritations, but hey. Peace. -rue
    | Posted on 2005-08-21 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]
      One type... "speach" is really spelled "speech" This was interesting... I think the last line was definately the best, how we need not let a word overpower an emotion. It was a really good thought. In the first stanza I also really loved how you portrayed the frailty of the world. It was a really good idea.
    | Posted on 2004-07-25 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]


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