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Glitch In The System

Author: bkj43
ASL Info:    22/m/va
Elite Ratio:    3.92 - 119 /140 /79
Words: 111
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A moment of self-sabatoge I guess

Glitch In The System

Would I were a sandal strap,
I feel I'd be either tied too tight
Or too loose;
I've been ruined by fantastic tales
Of Mother Goose...

In a room
In a basement
In a house
In a neighborhood
In a city
In a state
In a country
In a world
In a universe,
I dwell on love--
Like a hand in winter
Chilled for a glove.

But my interests are specific,
My size an 8 or 9 (maybe 10);
It must be able to fit
And cause comfort along the road,
For I have dreams to uphold...

--How I go through motions
While my lips stay so cold.

Submitted on 2010-05-10 17:46:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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