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    dots Submission Name: All I can do, is pray that you love me.dots
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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsAll I can do, is pray that you love me.dots
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    Pain:
    The pain that you feel, I've felt a thousand times before.
    This self infliction leaves no visible wound but the pain flows thruogh my veins, just as it does yours.

    Sorrow:
    The sorrow within you, and seen in me is only temporary.
    Sorrow caused by my own hand, desecrated on your heavy soul.

    Rage:
    The rage that lies in your cheset, the fiery anger that builds within,
    Hits like the harsh winds against the sail.

    Love:
    The love i hold for you questioned, second guessed, and doubted.
    Though truth be told, true love will never fade.
    For our love is never ending, it will never fade.
    See it as the sun that warms your supple cheeks, the blade of grass beneath your feet.

    Heal:
    Our love will never be lost or unseen. These tear stained cheeks will soon evade, and smiles will no longer refrain.




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