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    dots Submission Name: Patriots of the Earth “ ONE ” dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsPatriots of the Earth “ ONE ” dots
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    It’s so clear to me
    So very clear

    Is it clear to you, to ?

    I see the faces, global faces
    Connected
    By this, their, our, humanity

    Standing as one
    “ ONE ”
    In all our diversity
    Still
    One

    Simple

    All our feet
    Connect to the Earth

    It is so apparent
    To me
    So meaningful
    So profound

    Is it the same for you ?

    This feeling, gives way in my heart
    I could not contain
    Every ounce of its importance
    As it longs and aches
    To touch
    All of you

    To walk amongst you
    In the streets and cities of my home
    My planet
    My family
    And spend my time
    With all my friends
    If I could
    With each and every one of you

    Never again to be torn
    But enhanced by culture
    Or separated by country or borders
    And unite with philosophy

    To be as children, once again
    Making friends
    No matter what the race, the creed, the colour or religion
    Just simply playing
    Understanding
    The differences are, who we were meant to be
    Free

    If I could smash every barrier
    Every petty ideology
    Which separates us
    If I could tear down, this false monolith
    We call the state
    Burn every flag
    And turn us all into patriots
    Patriots of the Earth

    It beats at my heart
    It hammers in my head
    For the eyes of world to see
    If just for one moment
    The way we were meant to be

    The power of that moment
    And the love it would imbue
    Would turn each and every stranger

    Into

    YOU

    It’s so very clear to me

    It’s so clear to me
    So very clear

    Is it clear to you, to ?

    I see the faces, global faces
    Connected
    By this, their, our, humanity

    Standing as one
    One
    In all our diversity
    Still
    And always will be

    “ ONE ”

    Simple

    All our feet
    Connect to the Earth








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