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    dots Submission Name: the dreamdots
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    Author: lillucy
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       this poem is about a bad dream you can't get rid of.. ever.


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    dotsthe dreamdots
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    i dreamed a dream so far away,
    in this dream there is no day,
    the darkness comes but never goes,
    i wish that i had never chose,
    the dream so far away.




    Submitted on 2010-05-13 10:18:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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