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Beer


Author: mistiekidd
ASL Info:    31 like it f Al
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Words: 189
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Description:


I use to be a heavy drinker, stay in trouble and do stupid stuff that just wasn't me. So I had to call it quits. I have an occasional drink in my home amongst friends just no more stupid stuff.


Beer



BEER

I do it over and over,
more and more.
It is no longer me,
I'm not in control.

I crave it.
I want to taste it.
I feel a need.
It makes me feel
like I'm o.k.

I'm having fun,
the life of the party.
I don't know when to quit
I always want one more.

Last call, I can barely walk
and not fall.
Next bar,
dance like a stripper, your
serious I kissed a girl?

Oh well I want one more.
He looks cute, then again so
do all of the men.

Hanging with strangers, putting my
life in danger.
I'll regret this tommorow.

I don't even know you,
but I want to have sex.
I love you.
At least tonight, when I'm
drunk and feeling right.
























Submitted on 2010-05-13 12:31:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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