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    dots Submission Name: Daughterdots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    22/M/SoILL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 129/81/88
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsDaughterdots
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    I live past the water,
    The little stream where you last saw her,
    where the rippling and singing rocks
    called her daughter.

    I live next to the depth,
    Where she swam in the cold,
    and I lie on the naked banks,
    where teen love grows so bold.

    She sank pretty, in her white gown,
    His hand on her forehead,
    I watched with awe,
    as the bubbles rose to the surface,
    counting by two's each second she was down.

    I've heard a lot about the faith and the glory,
    Been skeptical,
    Watched in awe at the songs that were sung,
    She rose like a newborn, just like theold story.

    Wiped clean, she wept like a martyr,
    the man in the robe said a blessing and wiped away a tear,
    The dirt and the grime ached my clothes,
    I took a sip of beer.

    She strolled to the shoreline,
    the sun colored my life violet and gray,
    The pastor left the stream with a bible in his hand,
    No more souls saved that day.

    I swallowed hard, pitched the can in the wood
    the girl in white, pressed my hand on her shoulder,
    she turned around and she beamed,
    God, I just wanted to hold her.

    I live past the water,
    Where the Lord smiled, but forgot her,
    With The rippling and singing rocks,
    She was someone's daughter.





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