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    dots Submission Name: Infernodots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Angry
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    My motovation is overwhelming
    this drive from within is taking over
    its an inferno from the inside

    constantly going
    never ending

    when BAD days come & go
    this inferno breaths in deeper
    its life expectancy only grows

    it was born when i was 12yrs old
    from then on it grew...

    Thanks to your ingorance, Mother!
    Thanks to your sexual abuse, Step Father!
    Thanks to your cold sholder, Dad!

    I am no longer in control
    nor have I been since this inferno took its first breath...

    Giving up is not.. IS NOT AN OPTIONS!!!!

    Submitted on 2010-05-13 21:38:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the inferno is pain? or am i reaching?
    | Posted on 2010-05-19 00:00:00 | by Dutchess_aira | [ Reply to This ]

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