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    dots Submission Name: You Don't Caredots
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    Author: phsycoticangel
    ASL Info:    17/F/Aus
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 23/42/37
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 653
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    Description:
       I wrote this a couple of years ago...I was going through some old stuff and I found it. I wrote it after a friend of mine walked into my house and found me in a bad way, they tried to deal with what i was going through and tried to get me to stop hurting myself but i didnt listen. I should have.


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    dotsYou Don't Caredots
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    Dont tell me not to cut myself
    How selfish can you be
    This is a good thing in my life
    How is it you cant see
    You pretend that you care for me
    But try to take my knife
    You think you know my feelings cause
    You came and saved my life
    But now I have to leave this world
    Why dont you understand
    I should have died with Nix that night
    I should have held her hand
    You dont know my feelings, my thoughts
    You cannot feel my pain
    You dont know how i cry each night
    My knife helps keep me sane
    You only care about yourself
    You dont want to shed a tear
    I think about more then just you
    I live my life in fear
    I etch my pain into my wrist
    I cut and leave the scars
    You see, they wont ever leave me
    Reliant. like the stars
    I need my knife to help me live
    I'm living for my death
    Nix is waiting to embrace me
    When I take my last breath
    So now please dont try to stop me
    When you dont know my life
    You wouldn't care if you did know
    So now I'll use my knife.




    Submitted on 2010-05-14 02:53:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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