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    dots Submission Name: cubistdots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 673
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 203



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       ~when the joy of vision meets the poison of administration~


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    cubist

    when I was a kid
    I used to dream about
    ditches full of quicksand
    and faceless mannequins
    under dead grey skies –

    now I work there…




    Submitted on 2010-05-14 19:49:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is the definition of living nightmare. I feel for you.

    Not like when I was a kid I used to play in quicksand and shoot the faces off mannequins.
    Damn I still do!
    | Posted on 2010-12-05 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      You paint vivid mental images I want to transfer to canvas. It's a knack to do that--writing a painting-- and even more rarely do I read a painting I'd like to replicate, but this one has sketches going off in my head from the most amazing perspective lines... You should slant your career to include Muse. It would be impressive on a business card, possibly start a whole new field of artism.
    | Posted on 2010-05-17 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      this reminds me of harry chapins song taxi... and how they both got what they'd wished for... do you know that song? maybe i'll hook you up just because its worth listening to a million times...





    yup.
    | Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      
    At least you're aware of the cubicle movement...
    How do you plan on shaking the system?

    I do hope your small triumphs come from creativity--the joy of vision.

    An interesting little write. I wish more corporate cocks were this aware.
    | Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by O | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah! Life as she truly is! Unbearable unless one is a part-clown. Yassah!
    | Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]


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