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    dots Submission Name: Tattoos Are Scarsdots
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    Author: ashlee_jane2003
    ASL Info:    25-female-Georgia
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 216/214/41
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    Description:
       ok here we go... shelbi is my daughter that was adopted at birth ( name on my neck), dragonfly on my neck (my ex beat me for 6 years before I finally got away),Moms name on left wrist, dob and dod on right ( i pulled the plug on her when she was 44 due to a crack overdose), lady on left forearm luck on right, A very pretty heart on colar bone that was very poorly done and never finished


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    dotsTattoos Are Scarsdots
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    These tattos are the scars of what's happened in my life
    Because black eyes fade away
    and I havn't been beat with a gun or knife.

    Shelbi Jane... my one true love
    I had to give away
    Now that pain gets stronger and
    those tears get heavier everyday

    The dragonfly stands for freedom
    That I did not have for so long
    I cowared behind a man of violence
    And HE said what was right and wrong

    The wrist were the most pain of all
    being left alone was almost numbing
    but missing you hurts so bad
    evern though we say it coming

    lady luck seems cliché
    but myluck is really all bad
    my daughter, my dignitity, my mom
    I've lost all I ever had

    Last but not least a pictue of me
    So much to give held down by deciet
    A heart so beautiful with evil wings and a tail
    cold and colorless it's meant to fail




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      I really enjoyed your poem. It is heart breaking to see someone go through so much. You must be a strong woman. We all have scars that are tattooed on our heart, from our past. Its what we do with that wisdom that can change us in to better. There is only One, that can bring us out of tribulations and trouble. Sometimes, He makes us walk through it until, we learn to let of our past.

    Love of Christ,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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