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A Little Different

Author: mistiekidd
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Love
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I had been in a couple of relationships back to back, I was so busy having fun that I was breaking the hearts of the other guys. I am sorry for that!!!!!

A Little Different

Don't fall for me
Can't you see
Beyond all that is
free is pain!!!

I am no angel,
nothing great.

I'll be your friend,
I'm no saint.

I'm a free spirit,
I left and flew over
a wall.

The wall remains ,
you'll never get past

I warn you,
just move along.

Even though I'm
right, I'm simply
a girl who is always

I am wrong for

I am not as sweet
as you think.

Loan me your heart
I'll show you how it
feels to break.

You will have fun,
yet I can not give,
I take and take.

I know without fail
you will get hurt, your
heart will break.!!!!!!

Submitted on 2010-05-15 11:59:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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