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The End


Author: mistiekidd
ASL Info:    31 like it f Al
Elite Ratio:    4.49 - 37 /48 /65
Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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I wonder often why so many stories start with once upon a time, whose line was it any way, who used it first? That is where my poem comes from.


The End



Once upon a time

Happily ever after

Broken middle english

Beautiful words

A thin disguise

For lovers lies

Love short lived

Lives short lived

Beautiful stories

That are not true

Don't believe the hype

It is not going to happen
to you, don't be a fool.

The End




Submitted on 2010-05-15 17:08:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  personally ive got the first 3 lines of this piece and im hoping to skip the rest and have the happy ending.
rather ambitious of me i know but someones gotta get the happy ending and im quite convinced ive lived through enough alternate endings to be ready for mine.

i'll get back to you in a few months as to how it works out. but dont write me off as a fool just yet...
| Posted on 2010-05-15 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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