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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/806/391
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 464
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    I am who I was than and am once more
    The difference is what I am living for
    This is me, why canít you see I am setting myself free

    Awkwardness lingers through their minds
    They said I will leave this behind
    So if itís true, than whatís wrong with you, let me do what I want to

    Weíll hold you
    Weíll love you
    Weíll save you

    They said they are okay with it but they lied
    They said that everything is fine
    So if itís true, than whatís wrong with you, let me do what I have to

    They donít understand whatís in their grasp they donít know what to say
    Hoping for a change yet they donít know this is how I will remainÖ saved!

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