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    dots Submission Name: Sexually Explicit dots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSexually Explicit dots

    Had I lost my way
    Beached upon a promise
    The taste of succulence
    The brandy deep kissed of savouring
    Those soft and wanton lips

    I seem to have thrown away all the maps
    And every curve, every line
    Leads me further
    Deeper into her
    A fascination pouring out of a language
    Which trembled alphabets

    Tastes of it hung with epiphany upon my tongue
    And unknown spice
    Scent as far as orient mysteries
    As those rose in treacherous waves
    To every bastion of myself
    Sought relinquished

    And hands as sweat, so devouring
    Wished ever a concoction twice as potent
    Floated, blossom, eager the interpretation
    Of wishes
    Inside my finger tips

    I lay beside her
    Deep sea diver
    Drawing every ounce of life
    From the shuddering in her breath
    Without a heart beat, unless it beat
    Steady in the tempo of her

    Floods irresistible, the images
    Taut print against her ribs
    While the pelvis thrust is lifted
    And the aching desire is once again rigid
    And need again ponders satiated

    Madness inflamed by the twists of midnight
    Curls and eyelashes sweetly beckon
    With the soft supplicant moans
    She pressed
    Wrapped around my waist
    Her legs
    She whispered softly

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