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    dots Submission Name: Milk Cloudsdots

    Author: RisingSon
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 7/79/52
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMilk Cloudsdots

    hard swallow
    seek elation
    corners softened to circles in name
    blue-green hollows
    form the outlines
    come soft may you follow
    the same one tomorrow
    may milk clouds appear
    with no rain

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