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    dots Submission Name: Escapedots
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    Author: justwantedtosay
    Elite Ratio:    2.06 - 10/8/4
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsEscapedots
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    I tried to blame it on this town
    Too small,
    No culture,
    Just rednecks.

    I tried to blame it on my mom
    I was
    Just number
    Seven of ten.

    I tried to blame it on my body
    So weak
    And needy,
    Like a baby.

    I ran from this town.
    I didnít read her letters.
    I denied my own desires.


    And still it followed me.
    There was no one left to blame
    Save the one I canít escape.




    Submitted on 2010-05-18 02:36:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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