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    dots Submission Name: The Face of Unrecognised dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Face of Unrecognised dots
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    This heart is sick of hope
    Having strained its every chord
    To that strangled Mistress
    Believing it would
    One day
    Know love

    But now it shrinks
    A tiny prisoner in a tiny cell
    Of numbness
    And ponders poems
    While imagining
    What it never had

    A wasteland of sign posts
    It once hammered into the Earth
    To track its path
    Of continual hope

    Dissolute now
    Disillusioned on the price of love
    Its search bought and sold
    For the selling price

    Such is love
    The face of unrecognised

    And yet craving still
    Continues
    With all the hollow
    As if to latch upon itself
    Every dream of love
    Turned inward

    To hope

    Should a life time
    Be utterly lost
    In wishes unrequited
    And existence be, this time
    Devoid of love

    Whom, in ever-continual search
    Reminds you
    Of how you long to touch
    The heart of someone else

    Just hopeful
    Meaningless in their surroundings
    Where emptiness settles
    Taking root
    And becomes the reverberated
    Beat of your heart

    Hope
    Always
    The hope
    Of love
    And never known
    The heart
    Of someone else







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    | Posted on 2010-05-26 00:00:00 | by colbybradshaw | [ Reply to This ]


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